Examples
Judy is the girl who has blond hair who is standing
beside Bill. (confusing)
beside Bill. (confusing)
Judy is the girl who is standing beside Bill who has
blond hair. (confusing)
blond hair. (confusing)
Judy is the girl with blond hair who is standing
beside Bill. (confusing)
beside Bill. (confusing)
Judy is the girl who is standing beside Bill with
blond hair. (confusing)
blond hair. (confusing)
Judy is the blond-haired girl who is standing beside
Bill. (rewritten--and clear)
Ana has two children whose names are Felipe and
Luz who are in junior high school. (confusing, awkward)
Ana has two children who are in junior high school
whose names are Felipe and Luz. (confusing, awkward)
Ana has two children, Felipe and Luz, who are in
junior high school. (rewritten--and clear)
Bill. (rewritten--and clear)
Ana has two children whose names are Felipe and
Luz who are in junior high school. (confusing, awkward)
Ana has two children who are in junior high school
whose names are Felipe and Luz. (confusing, awkward)
Ana has two children, Felipe and Luz, who are in
junior high school. (rewritten--and clear)
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